Fall Break Feelings

Write a paragraph describing your fall break. Include information about who, did what, where and when. Use precise language and add details.

BAD EXAMPLE:
My fall break was boring. I just watched TV and slept. The End.

BETTER EXAMPLE:
       Hey! My name is Lisa and I'm in fourth grade. Last week, I relaxed for my entire fall break at home in Logan. I know it sounds boring, but I sort of liked it. I watched Chuck on TV while eating caramel corn Munch N' Crunch. The highlight of my break occurred when I took a four hour nap on Sunday! After I awoke, I felt like a new flower blossoming in the spring. When Monday came around again, I felt ready to come back to school. It wasn't my favorite break, but I think it was well spent!